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Yandel

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Elizabeth Freeman

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Proficiency Scores

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You're starting to include more information in your writing, which is a good start! Keep adding more details to help your readers understand your topic better.

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Sharpen your writing's purpose to ensure your message is explicit and focused, guiding your reader through your narrative.

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Stay focused on your main idea, and make sure to avoid getting off track.

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Add more descriptive details to make your scenes come alive.

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Make sure your story has a clear plot that readers can follow.

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Experiment with different writing techniques to make your writing more interesting.

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Make sure to structure your writing in a logical order to make it easier for your readers to follow.

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Keep your point of view clear and consistent.

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Add more vivid details to bring your writing to life.

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Think about your main message and make sure your writing supports it.

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Ms J's Feedback

Work is plagiarized and has not been reformatted or edited.

What you have submitted does not adhere to the project guidelines for a five-paragraph first person narrative. Please refer back to the rubric and submit a revision for a final grade!

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EXTRA CREDIT: Give yourself one point of extra credit for each of the website assets you added to your page: Header photo, square photo, video, quote, hook +_________
 

Add up the numbers on this page. Write your final grade here: _______ / _______

Exit Assessment: On a separate sheet of paper, respond to your grade. 
What did you do well? What do you need to improve?
What areas will you focus on next time to raise your writing score?

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My Scores

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