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Usherah

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Usherah, I can see that you did your research. However, it does not appear that you edited your work for organization or clarity. Please review your marks. I would like to see you submit an edited version, with updates to the grammar and punctuation as well as the organization. Please see the notes on your grading rubric and access your essay at https://ha.cool to continue to work on it. Email me at ereichel@philasd.org when you have completed your revised version, and I will regrade it. Please do this by 3/29.

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Proficiency Scores

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Your descriptive language paints such vivid pictures in the reader's mind, bringing your stories to life in a way that's truly magical. Keep letting your imagination soar!

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Your sensory language creates a rich and immersive experience for your readers, transporting them to the world of your story with every word. Keep stimulating those senses!

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You're great at setting the scene and making your story come to life with all the right details! Keep it up!

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You're starting to include more information in your writing, which is a good start! Keep adding more details to help your readers understand your topic better.

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You're getting better at staying on topic in your writing, which is good progress! Keep trying to stay focused on your main idea throughout your piece.

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Your writing paints some pictures, though it can be hard to understand sometimes. Keep practicing to make it clearer!

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Your point of view stays consistent, making your stories easier to understand. Keep it up!

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You're starting to get a clear message across in your writing, even though you sometimes wander off topic. Keep focusing on your main idea!

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Diversify your sentence structures to add fluency and variety to your writing, avoiding repetition.

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Reach!

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Stretch!

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My Scores

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