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Tyree

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Jim Brown

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Proficiency Scores

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You're getting better at staying on topic in your writing, which is good progress! Keep trying to stay focused on your main idea throughout your piece.

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You're starting to get a clear message across in your writing, even though you sometimes wander off topic. Keep focusing on your main idea!

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You include some information, but adding more details would help make your writing better.

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Strive for a more coherent and consistent storyline by fleshing out your characters, conflicts, and resolutions.

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Keep refining your context by adding details that really enhance the story's clarity and engagement.

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Deepen your imagery by developing richer descriptive language and sensory details to immerse readers in your narrative.

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Diversify your sentence structures to add fluency and variety to your writing, avoiding repetition.

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Experiment with different writing techniques to make your writing more interesting.

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Include more sensory details to make your writing more engaging.

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Ms J's Feedback

Tyree, you did your best to tell the world about what you've learned about Jim Brown! Good work! You can raise your grade by submitting a revision where you change the name "Jim Brown" to "I"! Remember, in this story, YOU are pretending to BE Jim Brown!

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EXTRA CREDIT: Give yourself one point of extra credit for each of the website assets you added to your page: Header photo, square photo, video, quote, hook +_________
 

Add up the numbers on this page. Write your final grade here: _______ / _______

Exit Assessment: On a separate sheet of paper, respond to your grade. 
What did you do well? What do you need to improve?
What areas will you focus on next time to raise your writing score?

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My Scores

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