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Tyree

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Tyree, you did your best to tell the world about what you've learned about Jim Brown! Good work! You can raise your grade by submitting a revision where you change the name "Jim Brown" to "I"! Remember, in this story, YOU are pretending to BE Jim Brown!

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Proficiency Scores

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You're getting better at staying on topic in your writing, which is good progress! Keep trying to stay focused on your main idea throughout your piece.

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You're starting to get a clear message across in your writing, even though you sometimes wander off topic. Keep focusing on your main idea!

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You include some information, but adding more details would help make your writing better.

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Deepen your imagery by developing richer descriptive language and sensory details to immerse readers in your narrative.

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Strive for a more coherent and consistent storyline by fleshing out your characters, conflicts, and resolutions.

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Diversify your sentence structures to add fluency and variety to your writing, avoiding repetition.

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Keep refining your context by adding details that really enhance the story's clarity and engagement.

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Experiment with different writing techniques to make your writing more interesting.

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Include more sensory details to make your writing more engaging.

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Why?

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How?

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Reach!

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Stretch!

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My Scores

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1

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