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Tawan

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Tawan, you started off well, but unfortunately your distraction in class has led to a low quality end result. This submission does not follow the framework for a five paragraph personal narrative. It is also a large portion of your grade.

It is of the utmost importance that you complete this project in full as soon as possible. Please go to https://ha.cool/home or https://ha.cool on your phone or mobile device and click "Sign in" to access your student dashboard. From here, you can write and edit your essay and view all related guidelines and grading rubrics. The final deadline for your essay is Friday, March 29th. If you do not submit a completed essay, you will receive a failing grade for Quarter 3.

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Proficiency Scores

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Your writing is becoming more organized, which is a positive step! Keep experimenting with different ways to structure your ideas for maximum clarity.

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You include some information, but adding more details would help make your writing better.

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You're getting better at staying on topic, but sometimes you still go off track.

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Work on strengthening your point of view to ensure it's clear and consistent throughout your writing.

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Strive for a more coherent and consistent storyline by fleshing out your characters, conflicts, and resolutions.

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Sharpen your writing's purpose to ensure your message is explicit and focused, guiding your reader through your narrative.

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Keep refining your context by adding details that really enhance the story's clarity and engagement.

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Make your writing more engaging and experiment with different writing styles to find what works best for you.

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Add more descriptive details to make your scenes come alive.

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Include more sensory details to make your writing more engaging.

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Why?

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How?

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Reach!

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Stretch!

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My Scores

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