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Sincere

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Arthur Ashe

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Proficiency Scores

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You're great at setting the scene and making your story come to life with all the right details!

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Your descriptive language paints vivid pictures, bringing your stories to life in a truly magical way!

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Your choice of perspective really draws readers into your story or helps them understand complex topics with ease. You're a natural at making your writing relatable and engaging!

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You stay focused on the main idea of your writing impressively, keeping your readers engaged!

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Your vivid imagery creates an immersive experience for your readers, allowing them to truly lose themselves in your story. Keep painting those pictures with your words!

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Your sensory language creates a rich and immersive experience for your readers, transporting them to the world of your story with every word. Keep stimulating those senses!

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Your stories usually have clear characters and plots, though some parts need a bit more work. Overall, they're pretty good!

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You're starting to include context in your stories, which is pretty good! Keep adding more details to make your stories richer.

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You're starting to get a clear message across in your writing, even though you sometimes wander off topic. Keep focusing on your main idea!

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Ms J's Feedback

Great work, Sincere!!! I love your essay. It's clear that you really put a lot of hard work into this. I'd like to see you do a little more editing on the format of the second half... Make it into a couple separate paragraphs, streamline the information (and delete redundancies) and add some more elaboration and imagery from Arthur's point of view. You can access your essay at https://ha.cool to continue to work on it. Email me at ereichel@philasd.org when you have completed your revised version, and I will regrade it. Please do this by 3/29.

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EXTRA CREDIT: Give yourself one point of extra credit for each of the website assets you added to your page: Header photo, square photo, video, quote, hook +_________
 

Add up the numbers on this page. Write your final grade here: _______ / _______

Exit Assessment: On a separate sheet of paper, respond to your grade. 
What did you do well? What do you need to improve?
What areas will you focus on next time to raise your writing score?

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My Scores

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