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Semaj TH

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Semaj, this shows that you've done your research on Bob Marley, but it is not formatted according to the guidelines for the five paragraph personal narrative rubric (that shows the moment Bob Marley's diligence is rewarded on his big day.) I would like to see you submit an edited version that adheres to the project framework. Please see the notes on your grading rubric and access your essay at https://ha.cool to continue to work on it. Email me at ereichel@philasd.org when you have completed your revised version, and I will regrade it. Please do this by 3/29.

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Proficiency Scores

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You're great at setting the scene and making your story come to life with all the right details!

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You stay focused on the main idea of your writing impressively, keeping your readers engaged!

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Your choice of perspective really draws readers into your story or helps them understand complex topics with ease. You're a natural at making your writing relatable and engaging!

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Your ability to craft a cohesive and compelling storyline is truly impressive. Your characters, conflicts, and resolutions fit together seamlessly, making for a captivating read every time!

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Your writing is becoming more organized, which is a positive step! Keep experimenting with different ways to structure your ideas for maximum clarity.

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Your writing paints some pictures, though it can be hard to understand sometimes. Keep practicing to make it clearer!

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Your descriptive words add some life to your stories! Keep practicing to make your scenes even better.

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You're pretty good at mixing up your sentence styles to keep things interesting. Keep trying different ways to write!

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Your sensory words bring some scenes to life! Keep practicing to make your descriptions even better.

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You're starting to include context in your stories, which is pretty good! Keep adding more details to make your stories richer.

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Why?

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How?

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Reach!

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Stretch!

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My Scores

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