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Samia

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Robert Johnson

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Proficiency Scores

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Your mastery of spelling ensures that your writing is clear, polished, and free of distracting errors. You're a spelling whiz!

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You're getting better at telling stories, and your punctuation is pretty good! Just watch out for a few little mistakes.

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Your grammar skills are getting better, with just a few small errors. Keep practicing to improve even more!

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You include some information, but adding more details would help make your writing better.

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Deepen your imagery by developing richer descriptive language and sensory details to immerse readers in your narrative.

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Strive for a more coherent and consistent storyline by fleshing out your characters, conflicts, and resolutions.

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You're getting better at staying on topic, but sometimes you still go off track.

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Work on strengthening your point of view to ensure it's clear and consistent throughout your writing.

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Sharpen your writing's purpose to ensure your message is explicit and focused, guiding your reader through your narrative.

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Add more vivid details to bring your writing to life.

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Ms J's Feedback

Samia, the person you picked was not an easy one to write about! I can tell that you performed research and learned more about his life, but that you may have struggled to find the meaning behind his story.

You are welcome to resubmit an essay for a regrade by the end of the quarter. You can edit this one to more closely follow the five paragraph essay format, or you can even choose someone else who may be easier to write about. Let me know!

And let's work together to communicate better when you need help!

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EXTRA CREDIT: Give yourself one point of extra credit for each of the website assets you added to your page: Header photo, square photo, video, quote, hook +_________
 

Add up the numbers on this page. Write your final grade here: _______ / _______

Exit Assessment: On a separate sheet of paper, respond to your grade. 
What did you do well? What do you need to improve?
What areas will you focus on next time to raise your writing score?

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Reach!

Stretch!

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My Scores

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