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Markeese

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Diana Ross

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Proficiency Scores

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Your vivid imagery creates an immersive experience for your readers, allowing them to truly lose themselves in your story. Keep painting those pictures with your words!

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Your writing techniques add depth and excitement to your stories, making them impossible to put down. You're a true wordsmith!

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Your choice of perspective really draws readers into your story or helps them understand complex topics with ease. You're a natural at making your writing relatable and engaging!

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You're getting better at staying on topic in your writing, which is good progress! Keep trying to stay focused on your main idea throughout your piece.

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Your stories usually have clear characters and plots, though some parts need a bit more work. Overall, they're pretty good!

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You're beginning to add some flair to your writing, which is nice! Keep practicing to develop your own unique voice and style.

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You're starting to get a clear message across in your writing, even though you sometimes wander off topic. Keep focusing on your main idea!

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You include some information, but adding more details would help make your writing better.

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Diversify your sentence structures to add fluency and variety to your writing, avoiding repetition.

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You can work on making marks like periods and apostrophes, so your reader can understand your thoughts better.

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Ms J's Feedback

Markeese, I have enjoyed your interest in this topic! I think you picked a fascinating big day event, and I can tell by your writing that you are passionate about Diana Ross and the muppets! I would like to see you keep working on your essay by adding even more details about Diana's life. What was it like for her growing up? What does she remember from being on the Muppets show? Make it up! Good job.

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EXTRA CREDIT: Give yourself one point of extra credit for each of the website assets you added to your page: Header photo, square photo, video, quote, hook +_________
 

Add up the numbers on this page. Write your final grade here: _______ / _______

Exit Assessment: On a separate sheet of paper, respond to your grade. 
What did you do well? What do you need to improve?
What areas will you focus on next time to raise your writing score?

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My Scores

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