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MaLeah

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Proficiency Scores

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You stay focused on the main idea of your writing impressively, keeping your readers engaged!

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Your mastery of spelling ensures that your writing is clear, polished, and free of distracting errors. You're a spelling whiz!

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Your grammar skills are getting better, with just a few small errors. Keep practicing to improve even more!

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Your stories usually have clear characters and plots, though some parts need a bit more work. Overall, they're pretty good!

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Your point of view stays consistent, making your stories easier to understand. Keep it up!

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You include some information, but adding more details would help make your writing better.

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Sharpen your writing's purpose to ensure your message is explicit and focused, guiding your reader through your narrative.

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Keep refining your context by adding details that really enhance the story's clarity and engagement.

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You're starting to be creative, but keep practicing to make your writing more interesting.

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Elevate your sensory language by incorporating specific and impactful sensory details throughout your narrative.

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Ms J's Feedback

MaLeah, I really like your essay! This was a fun topic. I can tell you did your research, and you worked hard to put it in order. I would like to see a bit more detail and elaboration. If you can submit a revision before spring break, I will bump your grade.

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EXTRA CREDIT: Give yourself one point of extra credit for each of the website assets you added to your page: Header photo, square photo, video, quote, hook +_________
 

Add up the numbers on this page. Write your final grade here: _______ / _______

Exit Assessment: On a separate sheet of paper, respond to your grade. 
What did you do well? What do you need to improve?
What areas will you focus on next time to raise your writing score?

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My Scores

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