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Kaylee

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Update: Kaylee, I have regraded your project with respect to your added information. Your final grade is a 36/40, which includes the +1 of extra credit for adding a youtube link.

Kaylee, I can tell that you did your research and worked to piece your essay together! I enjoyed reading what you have! Unfortunately, it also feels like it cuts off abruptly and doesn't adhere to the format of the project or reach a resolve.

I would like it if you could put a little more time into editing this and submit for a regrade. Please see the notes on your grading rubric and access your essay at https://ha.cool to continue to work on it. Email me at ereichel@philasd.org when you have completed your revised version, and I will regrade it. Please do this by 3/29.

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Proficiency Scores

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Your descriptive language paints vivid pictures, bringing your stories to life in a truly magical way!

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Your choice of perspective really draws readers into your story or helps them understand complex topics with ease. You're a natural at making your writing relatable and engaging!

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Your ability to craft a cohesive and compelling storyline is truly impressive. Your characters, conflicts, and resolutions fit together seamlessly, making for a captivating read every time!

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Your writing techniques add depth and excitement to your stories, making them impossible to put down. You're a true wordsmith!

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You convey your message clearly and effectively, making sure your readers always come away with a clear understanding of what you're trying to say. Keep shining your light!

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You're starting to include more information in your writing, which is a good start! Keep adding more details to help your readers understand your topic better.

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Your writing paints some pictures, though it can be hard to understand sometimes. Keep practicing to make it clearer!

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Your descriptive words add some life to your stories! Keep practicing to make your scenes even better.

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Your sensory words bring some scenes to life! Keep practicing to make your descriptions even better.

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You're starting to include context in your stories, which is pretty good! Keep adding more details to make your stories richer.

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My Scores

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