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Johnea

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James Meredith

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Proficiency Scores

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Your writing is exceptionally well-organized. It's easy for readers to follow along and understand your ideas effortlessly!

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Your ability to craft a cohesive and compelling storyline is truly impressive. Your characters, conflicts, and resolutions fit together seamlessly, making for a captivating read every time!

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Your choice of perspective really draws readers into your story or helps them understand complex topics with ease. You're a natural at making your writing relatable and engaging!

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You're getting better at telling stories, and your punctuation is pretty good! Just watch out for a few little mistakes.

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Your grammar skills are getting better, with just a few small errors. Keep practicing to improve even more!

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You're a pretty good speller, with just a few mistakes here and there. Keep an eye out for those tricky words!

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You're starting to be creative, but keep practicing to make your writing more interesting.

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Enhance your descriptive language by adding more vivid and relevant details to captivate your reader's imagination.

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Deepen your imagery by developing richer descriptive language and sensory details to immerse readers in your narrative.

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Keep refining your context by adding details that really enhance the story's clarity and engagement.

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Ms J's Feedback

Johnea, this essay is an improvement from your past work! You can do it! Keep pushing! Remember to look at the guidelines for the project, so you know what is being asked of you. I would like to see a new ending for this essay that reminds the reader why your figurehead is important and how they should be remembered.

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EXTRA CREDIT: Give yourself one point of extra credit for each of the website assets you added to your page: Header photo, square photo, video, quote, hook +_________
 

Add up the numbers on this page. Write your final grade here: _______ / _______

Exit Assessment: On a separate sheet of paper, respond to your grade. 
What did you do well? What do you need to improve?
What areas will you focus on next time to raise your writing score?

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My Scores

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