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Jaliyah

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Bessie Coleman

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Proficiency Scores

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You stay focused on the main idea of your writing impressively, keeping your readers engaged!

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Your writing is exceptionally well-organized. It's easy for readers to follow along and understand your ideas effortlessly!

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Your skillful use of foreshadowing adds depth and intrigue to your stories, keeping your readers guessing and eager to see what happens next. You're a master of suspense!

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Your mastery of spelling ensures that your writing is clear, polished, and free of distracting errors. You're a spelling whiz!

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You convey your message clearly and effectively, making sure your readers always come away with a clear understanding of what you're trying to say. Keep shining your light!

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Your descriptive language paints vivid pictures, bringing your stories to life in a truly magical way!

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Your vivid imagery creates an immersive experience for your readers, allowing them to truly lose themselves in your story. Keep painting those pictures with your words!

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Your attention to punctuation ensures that your writing is easy to follow and understand. Keep up the great work!

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Your mastery of grammar ensures that your writing is clear, concise, and easy to understand. You're a grammar guru!

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You're starting to include context in your stories, which is pretty good! Keep adding more details to make your stories richer.

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Ms J's Feedback

Very impressive research, great structuring, formatting, and fleshing out the details with a great handle on the English language. Well done Jaliyah. You should be very proud of your work. And thanks so much for presenting to the younger students! You did a great job.

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EXTRA CREDIT: Give yourself one point of extra credit for each of the website assets you added to your page: Header photo, square photo, video, quote, hook +_________
 

Add up the numbers on this page. Write your final grade here: _______ / _______

Exit Assessment: On a separate sheet of paper, respond to your grade. 
What did you do well? What do you need to improve?
What areas will you focus on next time to raise your writing score?

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My Scores

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