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Jakai

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Jakai, I see that you figured out your figurehead's big day and put the information in the right order so far. However, you have not met the requirements of the project, as you did not follow the 5 paragraph format of the essay. Your essay must include a flashback to your early life as George Washington Williams, and then the story of you receiving your reward for your hard work. Please come up during lunch to use the laptop and work on this with me. You can also edit it from your phone or a laptop at home. I want you to submit an updated version for me to regrade before spring break.

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Proficiency Scores

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Your writing is becoming more organized, which is a positive step! Keep experimenting with different ways to structure your ideas for maximum clarity.

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You're a pretty good speller, with just a few mistakes here and there. Keep an eye out for those tricky words!

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Your grammar skills are getting better, with just a few small errors. Keep practicing to improve even more!

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Your point of view stays consistent, making your stories easier to understand. Keep it up!

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Continue experimenting with different writing techniques to find the ones that best amplify your storytelling.

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Sharpen your writing's purpose to ensure your message is explicit and focused, guiding your reader through your narrative.

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Keep refining your context by adding details that really enhance the story's clarity and engagement.

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Make sure to include more details in your writing to make it clearer.

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Make your writing more engaging and experiment with different writing styles to find what works best for you.

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Reach!

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My Scores

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