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Azarri

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Rosa Parks

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Proficiency Scores

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Your mastery of spelling ensures that your writing is clear, polished, and free of distracting errors. You're a spelling whiz!

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Your choice of perspective really draws readers into your story or helps them understand complex topics with ease. You're a natural at making your writing relatable and engaging!

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Your mastery of grammar ensures that your writing is clear, concise, and easy to understand. You're a grammar guru!

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You convey your message clearly and effectively, making sure your readers always come away with a clear understanding of what you're trying to say. Keep shining your light!

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You're beginning to add some flair to your writing, which is nice! Keep practicing to develop your own unique voice and style.

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Your stories usually have clear characters and plots, though some parts need a bit more work. Overall, they're pretty good!

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You're starting to include context in your stories, which is pretty good! Keep adding more details to make your stories richer.

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Your writing paints some pictures, though it can be hard to understand sometimes. Keep practicing to make it clearer!

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You're starting to get a clear message across in your writing, even though you sometimes wander off topic. Keep focusing on your main idea!

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Enhance your descriptive language by adding more vivid and relevant details to captivate your reader's imagination.

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Ms J's Feedback

Azarri, you have shown a humanizing look at the life of Rosa Parks! Well done. Your project is definitely written from the unique perspective of your figurehead. On your next project, try placing establishing details at the beginning of your story, so the reader knows where and when it takes place and understands the context surrounding the tale. Our figureheads made choices based on their relationship to the bigger world around it. Zoom out to show us those details and you'll have a golden essay!

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EXTRA CREDIT: Give yourself one point of extra credit for each of the website assets you added to your page: Header photo, square photo, video, quote, hook +_________
 

Add up the numbers on this page. Write your final grade here: _______ / _______

Exit Assessment: On a separate sheet of paper, respond to your grade. 
What did you do well? What do you need to improve?
What areas will you focus on next time to raise your writing score?

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My Scores

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